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When you are not here,
Happiness is a fond memory,
Your absence, like a knife.

Drowned by you not being here,
I lead a different life,
Down the drain, all washed up.

Yesterday seems years away,
Overwhelmed with misery,
Unscathed? No.

Little by little I crack and break,
Everything turns to black,
Abandoned by the one I love,
Vitriol aimed at letting you go,
Entering a downward spiral.

My heart begins to fall apart,
Employing the state of despair.
?
©2005-2009 ~Renegade-Cavalcade
:iconrenegade-cavalcade:

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yeah, its sad and stuff!

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:iconspongefish:
aww this is sad :(

you're good at emotional writing :)
:iconaellawind:
:cries: That's... so sad... I love the last two lines most...

employing the state of despair

brilliant.

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If you have to think about whether you love someone or not, then the answer is no.
When you love someone... you just know.

=invisible-inc |=PoetryPlease |~ProsePlease | ~TheCrittersCorner | ~RavenholmTavern
:iconhauntedflower:
Aww...this is so sad...but it`s good too! Well done. :)

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