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Addiction Pulls You Down by ~Renegade-Cavalcade:iconRenegade-Cavalcade:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Fixed




I want you so bad it’s starting to HURT,
Why do you keep throwing me in the dirt?
I want to engulf you in a bubble of love,
And take you up high like a sky-scraping dove.

I need you so much it’s driving me MAD,
You are the girl I always wished I had,
I want to hold you and never let you go,
What I’d do without you, I don’t want to know.

I’m begging you now, why would you do this?
I would do anything, just for your kiss,
Now that YOU’RE LEAVING ME here on my own,
Moving on, and leaving me all alone.
©2005-2009 ~Renegade-Cavalcade
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Author's Comments

this one started off happy, (the second stanza) and then i got bored of it, scrapped most of it and turned it tragic! hehehe! this is my comeback one i think! (i hope!)
loves you all
adam x...x...x

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~Spongefish May 20, 2005, 6:30:08 AM
awww its so sad, but great writing, you have a great writing style for these such things. muchos goodness!
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~Renegade-Cavalcade May 20, 2005, 7:11:25 AM
hiya! thankies misss amy!! im glad you think so! ill see you at lizzie mc-powell's part-ay i think! how are you getting beach clothes:P?
adam x...x...x

--
Leave Me To My Britney Spears And Wine Gums,
I'm A Clone Like The Rest Of Them.
:iconspongefish:
~Spongefish May 20, 2005, 9:07:08 AM
yu-huh im going! i'll be adorning flip flops, cropped trousers and strappy tshirt. and maybe even a sun hat! thats the best i can do for the beach look, just short of turning up in swimwear :P how about you? haiwan shirts all round!?
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~AellaWind May 20, 2005, 11:06:41 AM
This is great!!!1one

CAPS LOCK IS GREAT!!!

O_O
why'd i put that one there?
No idea.
Hrmm...

Nice poem, yay for desperateness... if that's the word.. well... yay for the poem.

--
If you have to think about whether you love someone or not, then the answer is no.
When you love someone... you just know.

=invisible-inc |=PoetryPlease |~ProsePlease | ~TheCrittersCorner | ~RavenholmTavern
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!HauntedFlower May 20, 2005, 7:46:55 PM
YAY! You posted something....and it`s great! Good job,Adam! :)
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~Renegade-Cavalcade May 21, 2005, 3:15:27 AM
wicked! it is hawaiian shirts all round i think:P multicoloured flowers and all that! i am actually really excited:P hehehehehe cant wait! any excuse to look like a middle aged man on holidday!
adam x...x...x

--
Leave Me To My Britney Spears And Wine Gums,
I'm A Clone Like The Rest Of Them.
:iconrenegade-cavalcade:
~Renegade-Cavalcade May 21, 2005, 3:19:30 AM
yeah i reckon thats the word! i actually really like this poem! it started off as a poem for someone i like :P but then i turned it all sad:P
ah well! I LOVE CAPS LOCK! WOOO! and i tried creating a preview, i was quite proud! *stares at pretty supernova* yum...
adam x...x...x

--
Leave Me To My Britney Spears And Wine Gums,
I'm A Clone Like The Rest Of Them.
:iconrenegade-cavalcade:
~Renegade-Cavalcade May 21, 2005, 3:21:15 AM
thankeis again D D

--
Leave Me To My Britney Spears And Wine Gums,
I'm A Clone Like The Rest Of Them.
:iconspongefish:
~Spongefish May 21, 2005, 8:29:39 AM
lol! i may wear some sort of swimming cossie underneith as it could be running-through-sprinkler time! wheee i love revisiting child hood!
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